FIC: Stop, Rewind, (re)Play (LotRiPS, Elijah/various, NC-17)

[and_chocolate]

Title: Stop, Rewind, (re)Play
Fandom: LotRiPS
Pairing: Elijah/Viggo, Elijah/Sean B, Elijah/Dom, Elijah/Sean A, Elijah/Orlando
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~17,500
Beta: laylah

Summary: Elijah's having a fucked-up day. And then Elijah's having a fucked up day. And then Elijah's having a fucked-up day. And then....

A/N: Much thanks to laylah, who is a fabulous beta, a great friend, and my favorite pusher. Without her, I would be lily-white and headed for heaven, but having much less fun. Also, Stephen Geoffreys (who played Evil Ed in Fright Night) really has been doing gay porn since about 1994. I haven't seen any of the movies in question, but I can't imagine they're good, considering the titles. If you're curious, check out his listing at IMDB. And lastly, my very careful perusal of a lovely screencap of naked Viggo suggests to me that he's uncut, and so I've run with that. I don't really have any way of verifying (though if I did, I'd hardly be sharing it with you all, now would I? *g*).

( Stop, Rewind, (re)Play )

Comments

[libitina]

First: I sincerely apologize for not having read this earlier. I looked at it and thought, "I know that title. It must be a repost." Yes, I am stupid.

Next: So I forced myself to wait until lunchtime to actually read this so I had a chance of actually getting work done. I started it, and I got sucked in, and about halfway through I realised I needed to pee, but it was so good that I finished the story first.

The only thing I didn't like (and it's small) was that Sean Bean seemed more like Boromir than his own person, but I feel like a fool after reading your other comments for not even once thinking Orlando was being schmoopy.

Oh, and one more complaint -- I wanted it to be longer. I wanted him to fuck his way though the entire cast (well, no, not Sean Astin) -- and the crew -- because you did a really good job of writing convincing smut that wasn't over the top.

[and_chocolate]

First: I sincerely apologize for not having read this earlier.

No apologies necessary; I don't expect everyone--not even my friends--to read all of my fic. *g*

The only thing I didn't like (and it's small) was that Sean Bean seemed more like Boromir than his own person

I admit that I don't have a strong grasp of what his personality is like, other than that he seems to be gruff-yet-jovial, and kind of a typical Northern boy, so I was mostly making it up as I went along.

Oh, and one more complaint -- I wanted it to be longer. I wanted him to fuck his way though the entire cast (well, no, not Sean Astin) -- and the crew

o.O
I think that would've killed me. It was difficult enough getting him to finally sleep with Orlando because (and I know this is probably going to make me sound insane, but bear with me) Elijah was feeling like a ho and he was giving me grief about doing even one more person. I had to keep arguing that he'd be happy he'd fucked Orlando, trust me, and that he was sounding like a thirteen-year-old girl so cut it the fuck out. *g*

As it is, this is a) the single longest story I've ever written, and b) longer than all of my other completed RPS fic combined as of the date I wrote it. It may still be longer than all my combined RPS fic, for that matter.

-- because you did a really good job of writing convincing smut that wasn't over the top.

*blush*
Thank you. I really appreciate the comment; I was a little worried that my smut wasn't smutty enough in this one, because the plot elements seemed to take over.