First: I sincerely apologize for not having read this earlier.
No apologies necessary; I don't expect everyone--not even my friends--to read all of my fic. *g*
The only thing I didn't like (and it's small) was that Sean Bean seemed more like Boromir than his own person
I admit that I don't have a strong grasp of what his personality is like, other than that he seems to be gruff-yet-jovial, and kind of a typical Northern boy, so I was mostly making it up as I went along.
Oh, and one more complaint -- I wanted it to be longer. I wanted him to fuck his way though the entire cast (well, no, not Sean Astin) -- and the crew
o.O I think that would've killed me. It was difficult enough getting him to finally sleep with Orlando because (and I know this is probably going to make me sound insane, but bear with me) Elijah was feeling like a ho and he was giving me grief about doing even one more person. I had to keep arguing that he'd be happy he'd fucked Orlando, trust me, and that he was sounding like a thirteen-year-old girl so cut it the fuck out. *g*
As it is, this is a) the single longest story I've ever written, and b) longer than all of my other completed RPS fic combined as of the date I wrote it. It may still be longer than all my combined RPS fic, for that matter.
-- because you did a really good job of writing convincing smut that wasn't over the top.
*blush* Thank you. I really appreciate the comment; I was a little worried that my smut wasn't smutty enough in this one, because the plot elements seemed to take over.
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Date: 2004-03-18 11:13 pm (UTC)No apologies necessary; I don't expect everyone--not even my friends--to read all of my fic. *g*
The only thing I didn't like (and it's small) was that Sean Bean seemed more like Boromir than his own person
I admit that I don't have a strong grasp of what his personality is like, other than that he seems to be gruff-yet-jovial, and kind of a typical Northern boy, so I was mostly making it up as I went along.
Oh, and one more complaint -- I wanted it to be longer. I wanted him to fuck his way though the entire cast (well, no, not Sean Astin) -- and the crew
o.O
I think that would've killed me. It was difficult enough getting him to finally sleep with Orlando because (and I know this is probably going to make me sound insane, but bear with me) Elijah was feeling like a ho and he was giving me grief about doing even one more person. I had to keep arguing that he'd be happy he'd fucked Orlando, trust me, and that he was sounding like a thirteen-year-old girl so cut it the fuck out. *g*
As it is, this is a) the single longest story I've ever written, and b) longer than all of my other completed RPS fic combined as of the date I wrote it. It may still be longer than all my combined RPS fic, for that matter.
-- because you did a really good job of writing convincing smut that wasn't over the top.
*blush*
Thank you. I really appreciate the comment; I was a little worried that my smut wasn't smutty enough in this one, because the plot elements seemed to take over.