FIC: Stop, Rewind, (re)Play (LotRiPS, Elijah/various, NC-17)

[and_chocolate]

Title: Stop, Rewind, (re)Play
Fandom: LotRiPS
Pairing: Elijah/Viggo, Elijah/Sean B, Elijah/Dom, Elijah/Sean A, Elijah/Orlando
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~17,500
Beta: laylah

Summary: Elijah's having a fucked-up day. And then Elijah's having a fucked up day. And then Elijah's having a fucked-up day. And then....

A/N: Much thanks to laylah, who is a fabulous beta, a great friend, and my favorite pusher. Without her, I would be lily-white and headed for heaven, but having much less fun. Also, Stephen Geoffreys (who played Evil Ed in Fright Night) really has been doing gay porn since about 1994. I haven't seen any of the movies in question, but I can't imagine they're good, considering the titles. If you're curious, check out his listing at IMDB. And lastly, my very careful perusal of a lovely screencap of naked Viggo suggests to me that he's uncut, and so I've run with that. I don't really have any way of verifying (though if I did, I'd hardly be sharing it with you all, now would I? *g*).

( Stop, Rewind, (re)Play )

Comments

*sniffles*

[shinywhimsy.livejournal.com]

You've made me cry with a sex scene *sniffles* That's never ever happened before.

But they were just so beautiful together and Orlando was just unconsciously doing all the right things, all the things that made him shine brighter than the others, in this very uncomplicated way, totally himself. All of this combined with how tired Elijah was of the situation and how much he needed Orlando to be it was just *makes incoherent hand gesture* so freaking beautiful. I can't find a more fitting adjective for it, really.

I loved the whole thing but I just fell in love with two parts. The first one because it was like a punch in the stomach (not in a bad way). And the second one made this... warm undefinable feeling bloom (ha! no pun intended though) inside my chest and that was when the crying intensified times ten and I had to take a break before continuing:
1- Orlando shakes his head. "Every day I wake up and stand up out of bed is a day I believe in something unbelievable."
2- The Bean thing had hurt,..., but he thinks that if he wakes up in his own bed in the morning his heart might break.

This was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read... *sniffles*

Re: *sniffles*

[and_chocolate]

You've made me cry with a sex scene *sniffles* That's never ever happened before.

I don't know that my fic has ever made anyone cry before, period, so it's a new thing for me.

The first one because it was like a punch in the stomach (not in a bad way).

That's one of my favorite bits. It just sort of...came to me, that of course Orlando would believe Elijah. Orlando knows that strange and miraculous things happen and he knows it from personal experience. (I think I can probably also credit some of that characterization of him to "I Shall Please the Lord in the Land of the Living" by mirabile_dictu, which was still lingering in my mind when I started writing this.)

And the second one made this... warm undefinable feeling bloom (ha! no pun intended though) inside my chest and that was when the crying intensified times ten and I had to take a break before continuing

Awww. Thank you. I had worried that it was too much sap, but it just felt right to me that Elijah should be aware of the increase in emotional connection with each succeeding encounter and that it was getting close to the breaking point for him.

This was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read... *sniffles*

*hands you a tissue*

Thank you so much for saying so. I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it did make you cry.

Re: *sniffles*

[shinywhimsy.livejournal.com]

That's one of my favorite bits. It just sort of...came to me, that of course Orlando would believe Elijah.

It was a brilliant moment... fantastically well-written and well-placed too...


Thank you so much for saying so. I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it did make you cry.

No! Crying is good! I love reading stories that make me cry... I might be a bit of a masochist, me thinks *grin*