I was just talking to someone yesterday about how much I like the Groundhog Day (though it's been done before that, of course) rewind/begin again story set up, so when I saw this posted I had to read it, even though I was late for bedtime by over an hour (As I am again right now, #$!$% it).
But I did bookmark this to come back and fb, because it was awesome. It's also a keeper; I've put it in my memories. I'll hit you up with some more specific feedback when I'm not so sleepy (and because I want to reread it first), but basically everyone seems nicely IC (I enjoyed your very unusual SB), if a bit schmoopy (OB), and I enjoyed Elijah's internal thoughts. I thought his preoccupation with music was appropriate (although usually a whiff of songfic makes me skip a fic, because it's so frequently so badly done. Authors I've liked in the past can get away with it). Most notably, I don't care for Viggo in fics, and usually skim parts where he appears, but I didn't skim this one- I even enjoyed this Viggo, and that's about the second time ever (first goes to lalejandra).
no subject
But I did bookmark this to come back and fb, because it was awesome. It's also a keeper; I've put it in my memories. I'll hit you up with some more specific feedback when I'm not so sleepy (and because I want to reread it first), but basically everyone seems nicely IC (I enjoyed your very unusual SB), if a bit schmoopy (OB), and I enjoyed Elijah's internal thoughts. I thought his preoccupation with music was appropriate (although usually a whiff of songfic makes me skip a fic, because it's so frequently so badly done. Authors I've liked in the past can get away with it). Most notably, I don't care for Viggo in fics, and usually skim parts where he appears, but I didn't skim this one- I even enjoyed this Viggo, and that's about the second time ever (first goes to
Anyway, off to bed with me.