I worry that perhaps it's a little too sweet, that perhaps I'm a little too much of a sap when it comes to Orlijah....

Maybe it is a little too sweet, but that's what this fic needed, I think, to show how different it was from what went on with anyone else, you know? So the too-sweet worked really well for me. And it was still hot.

Sorry about the colours thing. I'll go back . . . Monday or Tuesday, I thin, and try and find better colours. Whee!